literature

slanguage and cigaretiquette

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Literature Text

He said chickadee,
'cause that's what they've been
calling me.
The chick with the car
and her very own language
and rehab for sophistication.

Behind their backs, gang hangers
rewrite official business men's
term papers,
and their leader woman
cavorts to the conversation tones.

But I still give slang to the new boys,
the ones I meet, who
offer a smoke ever-why time.
I, ever-why time, convince
it's too much of a decision
to pick a cigarette.

He stuck around
after his initiation cigar,
trying to let this slanguage
slip into his ette-cloud.
Yeah, babe.

So, I totally didn't notice the internal rhyme until someone pointed out the rhythm, and it's pretty cool, yeah.
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kov-hlub-koj's avatar
aww my lil poet/writer is so talented ^^